One more time (so sue me, I like this example): A: By telling the story of Westley and Buttercup's triumph over evil, The Princess Bride affirms the power of true love. A plot summary of The Princess Bride would support this thesis. Bad sign. A strong thesis excludes most of the text in order to make a specific claim. B: Although the main plot of The Princess Bride rests on the natural power of true love, an examination of the way that fighting sticks (baseball bats, tree branches, and swords) link the frame story to the romance plot suggests that the grandson is being trained in true love, that it is not natural but socialized. This excludes most of the text. Good sign. Your reader knows precisely which parts of it you'll be talking about and why.
The $10 price point and more in-depth wine list makes the Princess Cruises All Inclusive Beverage Package superior to the Signature Beverage Program on Holland America Line . Holland America’s drink package has a $7 per drink cut-off, which includes most cocktails but only a couple of unimaginative house wines. Holland America’s Beverage Program is slightly less expensive at $ per person per day, or $ per person per day with the 15 percent auto gratuity. The best deal for Holland America’s package is when you get it as an included benefit if your cruise was booked under the Explore4 promotion.
Levin and others have campaigned for new regulations on how advertisers can approach children; groups such as and Campaign for a Commercial Free Childhood have also pushed for marketing restrictions and have held summits about countering the consumer culture and sexualization. The organization TRUCE – Teachers Resisting Unhealthy Children's Entertainment – publishes media and play guides in which they review toys, check marketers' claims, and recommend age-appropriate activities. Recently, actress Geena Davis joined Sen. Kay Hagan (D) of North Carolina and Rep. Tammy Baldwin (D) of Wisconsin to lobby for a bill that would support efforts to improve the image of women and girls in the media.